I feel like you did an excellent job of putting us inside the head of the character. As someone that has dealt with anxiety and depression this felt real. I also like how the Drunk ends up helping. Didn’t see that coming. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
I feel like you did an excellent job of putting us inside the head of the character. As someone that has dealt with anxiety and depression this felt real. I also like how the Drunk ends up helping. Didn’t see that coming. Nice work and thanks for sharing.
I'm glad it resonated with you. I've found people either really like this piece or they just don't really get it.
Thanks for reading. I really appreciate it 🙏
Oh I forgot to mention the warm ending. 🙂
So vividly written. I could smell the convenient store. I could see the characters and I could feel the despair. Great writing Maximilian.
Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.