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Jun 20Liked by Maximilian P Siddell

I'm curious to find out if Zermayix is playing coy because he wants warn them of something in secret, or he's luring them I to a trap.

I'm picking up some potential double agent energy for sure, haha.

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Jun 19Liked by Maximilian P Siddell

Man, I loved this chapter. Zermayix really feels like somebody you’ve known for a long time. He stuck with me, big time!

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You're too kind Keyon. Your continued support is really appreciated.

To be honest I was a little worried about this one.

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Jun 20Liked by Maximilian P Siddell

How come? I thought it was great!

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It's a little bit short and uneventful. It's basically the first third of a longer chapter, the rest of which will come out next week.

I try to make sure the chapters aren't too much longer than 2000 words, since I think that's a good length for the serialised format— although I don't know a lot about internet serialisation so I'm kind of just arbitrarily making that up. If I'd released the whole thing it would've been a little over three thousand, which would be fine for a normal novel but I feel a little too long for an email.

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